Initially, I had chosen to do my technical description on IPS monitors. My main goal for my paper was to be informative on monitors. I quickly realized that focusing only in IPS monitors would exclude the other types of monitors. I, then, proceeded to start working on my draft. Although, I thought I knew what exactly I wanted to do in my technical description, which was to describe the different types of monitors and their functions. After submitting my first draft, I started to wonder if this does count as a technical description. My biggest issue was that a lot of the available information on these types of monitors are not very concrete.